zephyr 4 Posted June 23, 2004 Waking, inhaling bed tousled hair Curled up as spoons, body heat shared Neck caressed by lips, tongue and teeth Feel her breathing quicken, increase From her throat an earthy moan Escapes her lips, a sexy tone Eyelids kissed, lower lip bitten Eliciting a purr like from a fondled kitten Tongue traces circles on the palm of her hand Promise of ecstasy, nothing is banned Tongue traces twixt cleavage, over stomach and thigh Again her breath quickens, a short gasping sigh Breast flesh yields to the firmness of touch Never hurting, never too much Nipples teased, erect and firm Licked and blown on making her squirm Her heart beats faster as ecstasy flows Moisture forthcoming as excitement grows Passionate loving gentle and slow Deep penetration, bodies aglow The stomach tightens, the feelings grow clear The ultimate orgasm about to appear Harder, faster, quicker, Now! The release is ecstatic, the pleasure immense Too drained to talk or make any sense Hold her close, stroke her hair Let her know how much you care Share the moment, your lovers charms A life spent softly in each others arms Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tuppence 0 Posted June 23, 2004 The little death... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ean 7 Posted June 23, 2004 Le petit Mort http://avocadia.net/viewnode.php?op=nid=247 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
purrrrrrrrrrry 0 Posted June 23, 2004 ....and in Tantra?? B) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Observer 1 Posted June 23, 2004 Great link Ean and great poem Zephyr though still blushing through just reading it! Now feel like a voyeur or summat.... yikes Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zephyr 4 Posted June 23, 2004 Well you learn something new every day, le petit mort eh You don't get that from a manx girl, 'that's it huh?' is more like it I have no idea how they behave in tantra. Is that one of them exotic islands in the indian ocean (where did you go on holiday? Oh we went to tantra beautiful scenery but the exchange rate was xxxx, I only got two camels and a goat for the gf) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ean 7 Posted June 23, 2004 I only got two camels and a goat for the gf That not illegal in tantra then? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Observer 1 Posted June 23, 2004 Comes death but once to us all... Teehee. Thanks for kicking off the writers section in fine form Zeph. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zephyr 4 Posted June 23, 2004 I didn't though, I posted Odd sox not one of my best but I had no inspiration today. I will have to dream of languorous licentious women and see what happens (was going to say see what comes up but that would have been jumped on something rotten) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Observer 1 Posted June 23, 2004 (You wish! Heh!) *Sorry, cheap jibe, could not resist Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zephyr 4 Posted June 23, 2004 The post of mine took some thought to leave it wide open to interpretation. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tuppence 0 Posted June 24, 2004 The post of mine took some thought to leave it wide open to interpretation. You have to expose your soul if you are to be true to yourself otherwise your work has no meaning. It is ok if you really feel it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zephyr 4 Posted September 21, 2004 Well would you believe it a publisher wants to put this in a book. They did ask for erotic poetry and this I think is more erotic than filth. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ean 7 Posted September 21, 2004 Nice one, what book or publisher is it? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
