zephyr Posted July 3, 2004 Posted July 3, 2004 F**k me I want you so much Let me inside your bleeding crotch Want to lick your menstrual flow Want to taste your blood, let’s go! Depraved sexuality is my game I am the unholy Satan by name Come with me take my hand I’ll lead you to an unnatural land Kiss my deep you know you must Satisfy your basest lust Awaken to a life of sin Open up and let me in I am the defiler you’ve been intoning I am the master of pandemonium My life is one of lust and shame You have no-one but yourself to blame I am the one your deepest hate Submit now and accept your fate You will be mine I am the one The evilest being under the sun I am the one who will raise your tears I am dread your deepest fears You cannot hide yourself from me Deep inside you that’s where I’ll be
zephyr Posted July 4, 2004 Author Posted July 4, 2004 Well a good critical point made there Jay, you were warned not to read!
Minnie Posted July 5, 2004 Posted July 5, 2004 I'm with Jay on this one..................eeeeeewwwwwww! I'm sure you've put a lot of effort into your writing and it seems very deep and meaningful but those first 4 lines are eeeeewwwwww!
zephyr Posted July 5, 2004 Author Posted July 5, 2004 This took about half hour. I was listening to 'Cradle of Filth' and had just read 'Dennis wheatley' hence the satanic influences.
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