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The whole world will be reliving at this moment

The whole world will be believing at this moment

So is it you who's gonna listen?

So is it you who I'll be missin'?

The holes stretch out over my feet

The holes close right over my street

So have you got the brain?

So have you got the pain?

This gold'en state feels so different

This molt'en state feels so different

 

This is all I have been given

This is all I will be leavin'

 

Oh let the wind come crashing down, On my lonely shores

Oh make the waves come falling down, Oh on my broken home

Don't let the wind go blow away after all its so cold

Don't let the waves pull so far away after all its so warm

 

The sole survivor of the world is lost at this moment

The soul survivor of the world is found at this moment

So where is the one I can listen?

So where is the one I'll be missin'?

The world breaks under my low wieght

The world shakes above the broken plate

So where is my brain?

So where is my pain?

This time it feels much smoother

This time things run much smoother

 

Give me whats to be given

Hold on to whats been leavin'

 

Oh let the wind come crashing down, On my lonely shores

Oh make the waves come falling down, Oh on my broken home

Don't let the wind go blow away after all its so cold

Don't let the waves pull so far away after all its so warm

 

I hold the rain

I ride the seas

Whats at the end of that rainbow?

I hold the pain

I watch it slip

This rainbow is beginning to burn

Have faith in fate

Its all a test of love

We all believe

We all believe

 

And one tear can fall

But what dfference does it make

Keep them all in a box

A reminder of the strength

This box is coming undone

So just be done

We all believe

We all believe

In Love

Posted

i really reeeaally like this. it seems just to say so much, the way you use oppisites cold/warm, lost/found it just brings everything into it, i like the way you talk about love and fate - and then:-

 

And one tear can fall

But what dfference does it make

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i dont know, maybe it just sums up how i feel sometimes, so im drawn to it.. it makes me think of emptiness and love. and like youre name, everything, but nothing at the same time anyway, im probably completely out of it with the message of the poem, and how you felt while writing it, but either way its very

very impressive work :rolleyes:

 

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