Everything But Nothing Posted July 6, 2004 Posted July 6, 2004 The whole world will be reliving at this moment The whole world will be believing at this moment So is it you who's gonna listen? So is it you who I'll be missin'? The holes stretch out over my feet The holes close right over my street So have you got the brain? So have you got the pain? This gold'en state feels so different This molt'en state feels so different This is all I have been given This is all I will be leavin' Oh let the wind come crashing down, On my lonely shores Oh make the waves come falling down, Oh on my broken home Don't let the wind go blow away after all its so cold Don't let the waves pull so far away after all its so warm The sole survivor of the world is lost at this moment The soul survivor of the world is found at this moment So where is the one I can listen? So where is the one I'll be missin'? The world breaks under my low wieght The world shakes above the broken plate So where is my brain? So where is my pain? This time it feels much smoother This time things run much smoother Give me whats to be given Hold on to whats been leavin' Oh let the wind come crashing down, On my lonely shores Oh make the waves come falling down, Oh on my broken home Don't let the wind go blow away after all its so cold Don't let the waves pull so far away after all its so warm I hold the rain I ride the seas Whats at the end of that rainbow? I hold the pain I watch it slip This rainbow is beginning to burn Have faith in fate Its all a test of love We all believe We all believe And one tear can fall But what dfference does it make Keep them all in a box A reminder of the strength This box is coming undone So just be done We all believe We all believe In Love
gutterflower Posted July 6, 2004 Posted July 6, 2004 i really reeeaally like this. it seems just to say so much, the way you use oppisites cold/warm, lost/found it just brings everything into it, i like the way you talk about love and fate - and then:- And one tear can fallBut what dfference does it make . i dont know, maybe it just sums up how i feel sometimes, so im drawn to it.. it makes me think of emptiness and love. and like youre name, everything, but nothing at the same time anyway, im probably completely out of it with the message of the poem, and how you felt while writing it, but either way its very very impressive work [/b]
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