zephyr Posted June 23, 2004 Posted June 23, 2004 Can I touch you like I want to? Can I feel you’re body heat? Can I love you like I want to? If I can I’ll be replete Will you make love with me? Will you share you’re hidden charms? Will you make love with me? Hold me gently in your arms Could we build a life together? Could we put our pasts aside? Could we build a life together? In you let me abide Do the words I speak talk to you? Do they move you to a tear? Do the words I write call to you? Let me love you without fear Can you feel the love I’m sending? Can you feel the way I feel? Can you feel the love inside me? Telling you this is for real
Observer Posted June 23, 2004 Posted June 23, 2004 You undoubtedly have a talent and have surpassed yourself tonight. Did you already have that one or did you just rattle that off? Right, I am going to write something tonight (if I can) though I doubt it'll come anywhere close to your recent squirmishes with poetry!
zephyr Posted June 23, 2004 Author Posted June 23, 2004 All the previous Lurv ones have been seen, this one and sox are both brand new, this one written in the last half hour. A hint for you, when you want to write something put yourself into it, imagine all the things you want to say but are too afraid. Pretend no-one knows you and let all your feelings out. Good luck XX
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