Minnie Posted August 6, 2004 Posted August 6, 2004 Remember the days, Jay, my friend When you were young and followed the trend? All your own teeth, full head of hair, You've certainly suffered wear and tear. Your waistband's expanded, middle age spread, You're experiencing now the things young people dread. Think back to the days when you were a young one, I'm sorry to tell you those days are long gone. Grouchy old sod, a right Victor Meldrew, It was years ago that first pension you drew. Hairs growing out of your ears and nose, Bunions on your feet, corns on your toes. Incontinence pants, yes they're prone to leak. Recall the mishap you had last week? So take heed old Jay and remember this It's not a nice smell is stale old p iss. A grumpy old bugga, wrinkled and rotten. You were young once but I'm sure you've forgotten! ©Min2004
Lucy Posted August 6, 2004 Posted August 6, 2004 Those are way better than the original poem. Old people can be grumpy feckers, but I'm a young(er) grumpy fecker so let them crack on. I can't wait till I can bang my shopping trolley into some "trendy young thing" and give them a filthy look as if it was their fault.
Night Shift Posted August 6, 2004 Posted August 6, 2004 lucy, wwhen i came over her i 8 years) i met a younf chick and i said well see you in 10 years, and she has as many childen as tatoos!!! since those days!! when she is old thoise we children wont even care all know abouter. makes you think thoigh!!!!!! me and ytou babe will make sure she is looked after as she most properly desrves. sorry, got to stop shifting on nights,
Night Shift Posted August 6, 2004 Posted August 6, 2004 i am never going to switch thes e computers back on ever again but if they leave them on thats not for me to say.] im just going to walk arounf the buildin !g !!!
Jay Posted August 6, 2004 Posted August 6, 2004 Those are way better than the original poem. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Ty Lucy, I reckon mine is a lot more accurate than Minnies attempt, she's abused her poetic license to much greater effect.....honest!
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