Sparda Posted June 30, 2004 Share Posted June 30, 2004 You leaned over and you kissed me I felt my knees go weak You leaned over and you kissed me I couldn't even speak You leaned over and you kissed me With a passion flowing free You leaned over and you kissed me Sparks flew that we could see You leaned over and you kissed me A touch so soft and tender You leaned over and you kissed me A kiss I would remember You leaned over and you kissed me I'm sure I kissed you back You leaned over and you kissed me With the fire no kiss should lack You leaned over and you kissed me You left me wanting more You leaned over and you kissed me My soul you did explore You leaned over and you kissed me My heart no longer full of pain You leaned over and you kissed me Darling, kiss me once again ~i hope more people reply to this one than the other one i wrote this today took me a while all tho i didnt have my first kiss yesterday its just last ngiht i kissed my girl friend after a big arguement we had and it felt so real and so amazing...too much information osrry started to ramble~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grib Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 I wouldn't judge amount of replies as an indication of merit Sparda. If you want loads of replies write about Wurlitzers, Speed Limits, Chufts, Neds, Smoking in Public. Well maybe not Wurlitzers. Good pome that. I read it all too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stavros Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 ~i hope more people reply to this one than the other one i wrote this today took me a while all tho i didnt have my first kiss yesterday its just last ngiht i kissed my girl friend after a big arguement we had and it felt so real and so amazing...too much information osrry started to ramble~ I doubt that you'll get many replies when it took you so long to write. I bet it took Gibs even longer: http://www.romantic-lyrics.com/pf2.shtml Stav. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grib Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 Hmm I doubt this sort of thing will be tolerated on the forums. I remember a friend of mine wrote a pome about a wondering cloud and daffodils and things. It was posted and he tried to claimed he had just knocked it up. Got well over a coupla thousand reads (in just a few minutes btw). There were some serious writers who were extremely angry. I even saved the ManxNet thread I was that shocked at the language that came back. Me, I'm gonna go away and write me a pome about a Wurlitzer. What rhymes with Wurlitzer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rox Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 Morgan? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Observer Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 This has been moved to the music section as it does not belong in the writers forum where people take a lot of time and effort to post their own original material for the benefit of themselves and others and is now locked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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