Miss Take Posted December 19, 2006 Posted December 19, 2006 Haikus are so crap Syllables forced to fit in They don’t even rhyme!
When Skies Are Grey Posted December 19, 2006 Posted December 19, 2006 I'd drown with you to be together. Must you breathe? Cos I need Heaven.
Bombay Bad Boy Posted December 19, 2006 Posted December 19, 2006 At this time of year, Yuletide joy and happiness. Fuck me, socks again.
Albert Tatlock Posted December 19, 2006 Posted December 19, 2006 There was a young man from Nantucket Who looked so pail I was confused
Miss Take Posted December 20, 2006 Author Posted December 20, 2006 At this time of year,Yuletide joy and happiness. Fuck me, socks again. - except in a proper Manx accent, year would be pronounced yee-er as 2 syllables, ruining the poetic beauty somewhat?
Bombay Bad Boy Posted December 20, 2006 Posted December 20, 2006 except in a proper Manx accent, year would be pronounced yee-er as 2 syllables, ruining the poetic beauty somewhat? I'm not a Manxie. I am but a stopover, not here long enough.
Miss Take Posted December 20, 2006 Author Posted December 20, 2006 except in a proper Manx accent, year would be pronounced yee-er as 2 syllables, ruining the poetic beauty somewhat? I'm not a Manxie. I am but a stopover, not here long enough. I hope you enjoy your time on our fair Island Eat well and drink lots but if you do moan you know that there is a boat sailing tomorrow
Bombay Bad Boy Posted December 20, 2006 Posted December 20, 2006 I hope you enjoyyour time on our fair Island Eat well and drink lots but if you do moan you know that there is a boat sailing tomorrow I quite like it here, hooning around on my bike, mainly when it's warm. I know the boat well. I sail soon to see my folks, on t'other island.
Mission Posted December 20, 2006 Posted December 20, 2006 I'll sail away to that adjacent isle I'll pay a fare - but it's not fair! So I'll come on here and bitch about it yessir!
SugarBee Posted December 20, 2006 Posted December 20, 2006 look the butterfly pressed between the catalogue dead as a door nail
Bombay Bad Boy Posted December 21, 2006 Posted December 21, 2006 I'll sail away to that adjacent isleI'll pay a fare - but it's not fair! So I'll come on here and bitch about it yessir! I think, that Mission doesn't get how Haiku's work Look closer at them.
Mission Posted December 21, 2006 Posted December 21, 2006 I think you're right there dude - I just fancied adding some poetic stuff - even if it was in the wrong context.
manx-minx Posted December 21, 2006 Posted December 21, 2006 I don't know what The fuck you lot are on about Writing this poetry shite And what IS Haikus?
Rhumsaa Posted December 21, 2006 Posted December 21, 2006 the first cold shower; even the monkey seems to want a little coat of straw.
Bombay Bad Boy Posted December 22, 2006 Posted December 22, 2006 I don't know whatThe fuck you lot are on about Writing this poetry shite And what IS Haikus? Haiku's are easy, But perhaps beyond your wit. See Spot. See Spot run.
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