plan_b Posted February 11, 2005 Author Share Posted February 11, 2005 OWNED!! <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generation Terrorists Posted February 11, 2005 Share Posted February 11, 2005 That is quite mature of you ain't it Plan B. Resorting to childish smilies. Grow up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bwilde Posted February 11, 2005 Share Posted February 11, 2005 This is a writers poem though, so why not write how you feel in a poetic kind of way? Instead of the dull and boring "I'm so sad", hense why plan b wrote this poem. Anyone heard of metaphors? I have to agree there has to be right blend of positive and negative comments on this board, I have read a few poems and cringed at the blandness of them and yet people have written "I really love this work and stuff" and I can't help but feel they're lying. Well that's all I had to say, and before anyone says anything about me not contributing I posted a song I wrote the other day that's around here somewhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karellen Posted February 11, 2005 Share Posted February 11, 2005 Plan B's avatar reminds me of Neil from The Young Ones (remember that!) Young Ones Poetry: oh god, why am I so much more sensitive than everybody else ? why do I feel things so much more acutely than them, and understand so much more. I bet I'm the first person who's ever felt as rotten as this. could it be that I'm going to grow up to be a great poet and thinker, and all those other w*nkers in my class are going to have to work in factories or go on the dole? yes, I think it could. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guitar star Posted February 11, 2005 Share Posted February 11, 2005 Well I know where I am not wanted, and it is obviously the writers forum, <{POST_SNAPBACK}> why u still here then u tit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bill Posters Posted February 11, 2005 Share Posted February 11, 2005 I ffeel sure that your reasoned reesponse will nott have the desiired results Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zephyr Posted February 11, 2005 Share Posted February 11, 2005 plan b I think this is F*$&ing great You can't make this stuff up (well obviously you did) It makes people think about the s*ite they write It's down to earth and guttural Who could ask for more Jeremy I'm not good at saying bad things about someones work so I dont. Declan is the best person for constructive critisisml Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeremy Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 Hmm in hindsight, it does seem that this post was taken too seriously (myself included). Although I still find it quite irritating that people cant post tere poetry and be taken seriously yeah people might see it as stupid or crap. But y'know maybe people want advice on how to get better. Instead of being told that everything you do is pointless as its all a pile of xxxx. No-ones oviously used that phrase tat i know of. but its how it makes you feel aout your writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
plan_b Posted February 12, 2005 Author Share Posted February 12, 2005 Right, thats it. This whole thing has just got stupid. To everyone: I did this as a spare of the moment thing, thats all. Im sure some of the best poetry is that kind. Jeremy: This was not meant to be a serious post so I wouldn't give it a second thought if I was you. Zephyr: Thank you very much Karellen: Yeah, the young ones are ace, but unfortunatly, its not Neil. Generation Terrorists: I honestly couldn't care less for your opinion. You seem like a bit of a w*nker Guitar Star: I wouldn't give you the satisfaction of leaving you too you write your crappy poems about "love". Maybe you should p*ss off and buy yourself a dictionairy or stop being such a lazy c*nt and type the words properly. Thats the end of that one. Jesus................. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Observer Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyge Brahe Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 buy yourself a dictionairy <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simon Posted February 12, 2005 Share Posted February 12, 2005 If you re arrange the words in a dictionary then you've got a great poem, or even a novel. Perhaps the greatest poem or novel ever written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generation Terrorists Posted February 13, 2005 Share Posted February 13, 2005 Well, Plan B i got to give you credit for sorting this like an adult. Yeah i might have been a bit of a w*anker. Sorry about that man. I'm 17 tomorrow so i got a lot of growing up to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bill Posters Posted February 13, 2005 Share Posted February 13, 2005 Sorry about that man. I'm 17 tomorrow so i got a lot of growing up to do. I think if you are able to apologise, then you are well on your way. There are many 'adults' twice your age who haven't learned that skill yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generation Terrorists Posted February 13, 2005 Share Posted February 13, 2005 I know. I'm mature for my age I think... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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